8-Part Story Structure: Sixth Sequence

Posted in blogroll on February 8, 2010 by Karratti

Sequence 6: The Final Test

Sequence 5

Of all the different sequences, this one is probably the easiest to explain, as well as the easiest to identify during a story. This is the epic battle, the last great struggle, and the final showdown where there’s no holding back, no escape, and no giving up. Only one person is getting out of this event on top, and we hope against hope that it’s going to be the protagonist.

Now, while there often isn’t a direct cut between the fifth and sixth sequences, the Climax of the film is almost always recognizable, and often is the part that the audience remembers best. It’s the big bang, the last hurrah, the super struggle that forces the protagonist to face down and defeat (or lose to) the antagonist.  It can be serious, it can be horrifying, or it can be hilarious, but it’s the huge, epic, high point of the film where everything depends on the outcome of this fight for both the protagonist and the antagonist.

And often, it’s not even about a fight to the death. Sometimes it’s about the fight for the truth, or to overcome an internal struggle. Sometimes it has nothing to with defeating something, but instead the hero’s goal is simply to survive.  While there are many different examples of very traditional climaxes, (ie Hero vs Villian), it would be beneficial to recognize the less-understood climaxes, or those without an easily discernible beginning and end to the actual “sixth sequence.”

Some films are less traditional as far as having a personified antagonist, especially in films like Romantic Comedies, or even many comedies in general. Quite often, these stories revolve around a single protagonist or two, both of whom often act as antagonists for one another throughout the story as their relationships change.  Because of these shifting in relationships, often the sixth sequence, or the climax, involves the two of them finally being honest with each other, and finally making a clear choice about the relationship.

To illustrate what I’m talking about, let’s tale a look at the film While You Were Sleeping, which has less to do with the more obvious action-oriented “fight to the death”, but still utilizes the sixth sequence correctly to give us the climax of the film.

In the film, Lucy has found herself in a convoluted and awkward situation. She has been mistaken for the fiancé of Peter, a comatose man who she barely knows, and through a strange set of circumstances has been accepted into his quirky, yet wonderful surrogate family. But by the time Peter wakes up, Lucy has fallen for Jack, her “fiancé’s” brother, is worried about living a lie, and at the same time is concerned that she’s going to lose the relationships that she’s built up with this family that she’s never really known.

All of this comes to a peak at Lucy and Peter’s wedding, where the titular walking-down-the-aisle could be easily interpreted as climbing up a proverbial mountain.  With Peter on one side, and his best man, Jack, on the other, the visual representation of Lucy’s choice is unmistakable. We, as the audience, watch as she struggles, trying to make this decision that will drastically affect her life forever. And it is this decision, this action, that is key. This is the crux of climax. Where the story hits its highest point, where this one moment will irreversibly alter the protagonist’s path, creating a fork in the road which can never be changed.

For Lucy, this choice came down to dishonesty vs honesty, and dealing with the consequences of either choice. Either she could go on living a lie forever, or she could come clean with the truth, and face the music. Now, as a storyteller, this set-up is obvious.

It’s the underlying dilemma that has pervaded the story for the entire film, and signs pointed to this being the final confrontation. It’s not about Lucy vs someone else, but instead it’s about Lucy facing herself. In her struggle to learn and grow, we’ve come to understand who this character is. We are rooting for her happiness. And we know that she has to go through this trial, but we hope that she’s going to be alright.

You see, the audience doesn’t necessarily need some super-surprise ending here. There need not be some impressive meteor that comes crashing down, interrupting everything. Instead, the audience is going to expect Lucy to tell the truth, because that’s who we know her to be. She’s only “herself” when she’s being honest, and for her to be happy, she’s going to have to do that.

Now, the climax does NOT include the final resolution, or even the consequences of the final showdown. Instead, it leads up to and ends at the choice. When the choice is made, the momentum shifts down, over the hill. The climax is the road up, and the peak, but the next sequence begins as that decision is made.

Summary

- The climax begins with the proverbial climb to the final summit.

- There can be no chance for escape, at least reasonably. This final action should be one that must happen.

- The choice/action of the climax must be irreversible. There is no turning back after this has occurred.

- The protagonist will be changed forever because of the actions of the climax.

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the longing

Posted in Writing with tags , on January 30, 2010 by Karratti

The warrior stood, staring off into the distance. He stood in the middle of an empty valley, one lined with trees, snow, and the echoes of meaning now lost into the annals of history. The sky seemed bleak, the sun filtering through a haze of darkening clouds, a looming backdrop that made the goal all the more insurmountable. And yet still, the conflict was as inevitable as was the rise of a new day’s horizon.

His weapons were worn, chipped, and weathered from use, the evidence of past struggles and battles etching their fables across the tools of his victory. Yet still, he cradled them in each hand, the weight familiar, the grip understood, and the use understood. His clothes were worn, evidence of past travels leaving tears and marks in various places. And yet, he wore the same garments as when he first began his journey, wearing the stains upon himself with pride, as evidence of trials overcome.

Tales of the warrior were many, but sparse. Some said that they knew him. They knew his habits, they knew his tendencies. And yet, pressed for details, they found themselves at a loss to explain his most basic nature. Others simply knew of him. His name was familiar to many, either whispered on the lips of those who wished to exaggerate his adventures, or shouted with scorn after he had left to continue his journey. But always, there was a memory associated with any who recognized his name.

His name… His name was of the sort unforgettable. His name carried legend, carried myth, carried sorrow, carried strength. His name was dependable to those who knew him well, and yet perhaps this was his greatest struggle. For his was the nature of the guardian, always hoping to serve others, but not realizing that the relationship was often not mutual. Offering help, and receiving doubt and scorn in return.

The valley around him reflected to him the solitude of his nature. With the silence of the world surrounding him, birds did not sing, winds did not blow, and creatures made no movement. The echoes of meaning were no longer there, and in their place there was a deafening silence that served only to confirm his own realizations. He stood, facing this final challenge alone.

Those who would claim him as friends had long ago given up their contact. Those who would still claim him as friends felt just in openly mocking him. And why should they not? The warrior, his quiet nature intimidating to most, seemed to exude dispassion, encouraging those close to him to abandon him to his personal ambitions. Those around him were kept at an arm’s length, and they shared their enthusiasm in kind, simply walking in the other direction.

They saw not the pain in his eyes, or the sorrow in his heart. They felt not the ache in his mind, nor made any attempt to inquire of his inner helplessness. Instead, they saw only what they would allow their eyes to see, and felt that by seeing his appearance, they knew his heart. Wrong they were.

Billowing clouds continued to darken, casting their shadow across his stature, as he gazed into the darkness. His goal lay there, hidden in the trees, but real nonetheless, but still it was cast in shadow. As the rain looked about to fall, he continued his march, hoping that there, in the abyss that awaited him, answers may lay in wait. The struggle would be epic, and the battle nearly insurmountable, and yet he knew that there was no other way.

And so these weapons would be utilized for one last thrust, and though the outcome was uncertain, this much was sure.

He would march to the summit alone.

8-Part Story Structure: Fifth Sequence

Posted in Entertainment, Film, Story, Writing, blogroll with tags , , , , , , on January 12, 2010 by Karratti

Sequence 5: The Calm Before the Storm

Sequence 5

After pushing the protagonist to his or her limits at the end of the fourth sequence, there needs to be a moment of calm where our hero can rebuild his strength.  Often times, this is the part in the story where the hero is at his lowest.  He’s lost something tantamount.  He feels like he can’t go on, but knows that he must.  Very often, there is someone at his side who is there to remind him not only of his duty, but also of what he must do.

This scene is essential, because it allows us to empathize with the characters in a way that helps us to feel like we truly know them.  We’ve seen them through several highs and lows, but now we’re seeing them handling their greatest failure.  Do they force through it reluctantly?  Or are they unflinching?  If you want to deepen the audience understanding of the character, you must show what happens when they are at their lowest.

This sequence is often short, but unbelievably powerful, and memorable if done right.  And to illustrate this, let’s take a look at the Christopher Nolan film, The Dark Knight.

In the film, Bruce Wayne was resigned to give himself to the police in an effort to stem The Joker’s tide of murders across Gotham.  But at the last moment, Harvey Dent took his place, claiming that he himself was The Batman, and offering himself up to be arrested.

This leads to a difficult chase as Bruce, as Batman, must rescue Harvey from The Joker’s attempt to destroy the police convoy, and at the same time capture the Joker once and for all.

But of course, nothing with The Joker is ever so simple.  After a powerful scene in the interrogation room, Batman is only able to save Harvey, during which time the former DA is horribly disfigured, and his childhood friend Rachel is obliterated in a violent warehouse explosion.

It is at this time that we see Bruce in his home, clutching the Batman cowl, and peering with agony into the events that his becoming the Dark Knight has brought upon him and Gotham.

Bruce Wayne: Alfred…

Alfred: Yes, Master Wayne?

Bruce Wayne: Did I bring this on her? I was meant to inspire good. Not…madness. Not…death.

Alfred: You have inspired good. But you spat in the faces of Gotham’s criminals; didn’t you think there might be some casualties? Things were always gonna get worse before they got better.

Bruce Wayne: But Rachel, Alfred…

Alfred: Rachel believed in what you stood for. What we stand for. Gotham needs you.

Bruce Wayne: No, Gotham needs its true hero…and I let that murdering psychopath blow him half to hell.

Alfred: Which is why, for now, they’re gonna have to make do with you.

Alfred acts as Bruce’s conscience, telling him what he already knows, comforting him in his time of need, but not allowing him simply to give up.  Bruce must take up the mantle of The Batman, and he can’t simply let The Joker win.  Now the calm is over, and the storm of climax is just in front of us.

The fifth sequence is about the protagonist gathering his forces.  It’s a point in the film that is often called the “False Ending”.  It looks like the antagonist has won, and that all hope is lost.  If the hero were to give up right now, the story would be complete, and the ending would be such that the villain had won. Now, of course, that would leave some questions unanswered, but the audience at this point should get a sense of calm, and the action should take a lull.

But, of course, it’s not going to stay that way for long.

Summary

- This is the lowest point of the story for the protagonist.

- This is truly a calm before the storm of the climax, where the protagonist must muster his forces for one last, final strike against the antagonist.

- Often, other characters will act as the protagonist’s conscience, showing them what they must do to overcome this seemingly insurmountable enemy.

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